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Post time 2018-10-8 19:20:58 | Show all posts |Read mode
Edited by ihaveausername at 2018-10-8 06:22 PM

Author's Note: I wanted to give haikus a try, so this particular poem is made up of a bunch of them (which is why it doesn't rhyme and why there is some weird spacing). I feel like you already know this, but just in case, haikus are short poems that use a 5-7-5 meter (5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables). They're usually stand-alone, but I've linked a whole bunch together into an almost-story here. As always, enjoy!

A Showcase of Thunder
So it begins now
Take your places, everyone
Curtain going up.

The wind, it swirls as
Droplets fall from the heavens
Before this, silence.

A thunderous crash sounds
From high above, and with it
Comes sheets of fire

Fire in the sky
Bright, jagged reminders of
Nature's true power

A downpour cometh
Rounded raindrops soak the earth
The sky is a stone

A gray stone above
Not calm, but patterned- flecked with
Light, also shadow

Shadow casts over
Earth, cut by the powerful
Wonderous sounds and sights

A silent rumble
In the Earth announces that
It's nearly over

Sky clears, rain stops, end.
Curtain down again. Good job.
Good show, everyone.

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Post time 2018-10-8 23:07:08 | Show all posts
Edited by Pumpkin at 2018-10-9 10:00 AM

My Snowcloud is a storm talent.  She creates thunder, lightening, and rain but she mostly loves creating snow storms. Wonderful poem/ haikus!!!!
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Post time 2018-10-9 19:32:33 | Show all posts
Ooh, these are so good!
i have arisen from my five year hiatus!! jk i have gone back into the grave

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Post time 2018-10-13 14:34:01 | Show all posts
This is absolutely beautiful!

It makes me so happy to have such a beautiful poem/haiku about my talent!
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