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[poem] Art Talents (New talent series!)

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ihaveausername Post time 2018-9-28 21:44:12 | Show all posts |Read mode
Hey, guys! I'm starting a new 'talents' series using the new talents in 2.0! Let's get this started with art talents (by the way, this was originally written as a commentary on the real-world artists- and how people see them, so if it doesn't seem very 'fairy', that's why that's why). By the way, I will NOT be doing storytelling talent since I concluded my last talent series with it. As always, constructive criticism is always enjoyed! I hope you enjoy!A Viable Career
A swirl of colors issues forth
From hands, from mind, from brush,from soul
Sweeping, grand, broad-stroked lines
Tiny details yet to find
Edit, splash, mistake, effort, tryand try again
Smudge, rewind, repaint, retry
Add things that were not therebefore
Add things that cannot be ignored
Inspiration gone, time isn’t long,what else can now be done
Can’t hurry genius, can’t hurrygood, or even mediocre
Can hurry bad, can hurry poor, canhurry something less-than-mine.
What matters now is only time, sokind of bad now becomes fine.
The scenes within a mind go gray,the colors on the canvas stay
But they’re not what they should orcould be and are not done properly
Time, yes time, it’s always time. Italways comes back to time.
It always comes back to time; needto shift this paradigm.
Begone now wretched commission,begone these attempts to relate
Issue forth now the true mind; issueforth and unconfine
Channel from the very soul, sincethey’re no longer in control
Form an idea, a new goal- to makethis fractured art now whole.


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Nighty Post time 2018-9-28 23:30:29 | Show all posts
This is wonderful and a great way commemorate all of the talents out there!
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MoonFields Post time 2018-9-29 11:49:20 | Show all posts
| What a nice tribute to all the Art Talents out there~
| It's true that taking Arts as a career choice is very challenging and if not, one of the most tiring in terms of workflow.
| Sure enough, every project is worth it in the end. Love the poem! C;
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Pumpkin Post time 2018-9-29 13:08:43 | Show all posts
Wonderful poem!!!! I can't wait to see the other talent poems you're working on. I loved all your past poems.
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PearlSnow Post time 2018-9-30 12:16:45 | Show all posts
Great poem! I love the two lines where you're telling the actions of an artist: "Edit, splash, mistake, effort, try and try again, smudge, rewind, repaint, retry" I also like how you're doing all of the talents, so definitely looking forward to more!
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xmistyx Post time 2018-10-6 10:38:21 | Show all posts
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