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[poem] A Flight Of Desire

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Post time 2018-6-6 08:54:45 | Show all posts |Read mode
A tail of fire
A trail of light
A tale of desire
To take flight.

With the eyes of the watchful people,
A grand burst of colors swept over the city.
The marvellous chime of the cathedral
Rang amongst the gaiety.

A lady of power
With her admired heart of gold
Stood tall by the royal clock tower
Poised; sangfroid.

Just like anyone
She held fast to the mystical notion
That such tail of fire
That emits a trail of light
Gives chance for desire
To take flight ☆




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Post time 2018-6-9 21:38:19 | Show all posts

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That is beautiful, Eleanor! I love it!
"We breathe. We pulse. We regenerate. Our hearts beat. Our minds create. 37 seconds well-used is a lifetime." - Mr. Magorium's Wonder Emporium
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AriFoxy238 replied at 2018-6-9 21:38
That is beautiful, Eleanor! I love it!

Thank you sm! <3 <3
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Post time 2018-6-10 09:23:35 | Show all posts

You are very welcome!
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Post time 2018-6-10 19:02:56 | Show all posts
Well written! Great Poem!  

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Thank you! <3  Post time 2018-6-10 21:39
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Post time 2018-6-11 05:54:57 | Show all posts
I like it well done.

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Aww thanks so much! <3  Post time 2018-6-11 08:08
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Post time 2018-6-11 07:33:57 | Show all posts
Wonderful Poem. It's really beautiful.

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<3 <3 Thankieww! I'm glad you like it!  Post time 2018-6-11 08:08
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Post time 2018-6-14 02:36:57 | Show all posts
Such a beautiful poem, thank you for sharing <3

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Thank YOU for sparing time to read it <3  Post time 2018-6-14 09:58
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Post time 2018-6-14 04:16:06 | Show all posts
Very serene

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Thank you <3 That was the vibe I was trying to portray  Post time 2018-6-14 09:57
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