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Post time 2018-11-1 02:16:12 | Show all posts |Read mode
I go all around
with my wings I fly
to gather ingriedents that float in the sky
or lay on a tree or the ground

Let's start where a palm tree can grow, palm tree cove
oh look in the air some petals of a rose
into my pouch it goes
Now onto never fruit grove

yum in the trees delicious fruit of orange and green
but nothing i can grab to be seen
wait some maple and oak leaves
ok time to fly to sunflower gully, for more ingredients and a summer breeze

wow a juicy blueberry
Im a very lucky fairy
I could use a little snack
ok now on to the first autumn area, gotta stay on track

cotton puff field is the first meadow of fall
where cotton stands tall
hey theres quite a bit of stuff
including bits of dandelion fluff

The next place to go, maple tree hill
all seems quiet and still
hmm nothing to grab, nothings fallen from being bumped or shaken
ill take a short nap then awaken
wait, is that a fallen maple leaf on a branch i see
yes indeed, now to retreive it from the tree

now to the pumpkin patch, a place where a log holds food for the critters to munch
and trust me they eat a bunch
hey look, some more blueberries, rasberries, and even some acorns oh how great is this
maybe i can send an acorn to the frost fairy gliss

last in fall is acorn summit
and the temperature has started to plummit
i found more supplies
and now its time to move to the season of snow and ice

snowcape glade is the next place to go cause stopping in fall will not suffice
but first a frost fairy must frost my wings to keep them safe from snow and ice
ok, my wings are safe, hey look more dandelion fluff
I tell you there isn't a place you wont find that stuff

Oh look time to go to evergreen overlook can't miss that
my wings are frosted but im still cold
Im not used to snow but I'll be bold
oh good some stuff to grab in the pine tree so tall
ok now on to chilly falls

boy im tired but i still got more meadows
hey I found another maple leaf that is orange and red
ok now don't get me wrong, winter is great but im ready to get out of the ice and snow
so here I go to tree top bend

ahh it's much warmer now
hey look two lily petals oh wow
where to next, not hard to pick it
Where else? Neverberry thicket

Here i am at the thicket
There is a fairy hospital here, but it is not in use
ok seems no ingredients are loose
ok cherry blossom heights time, lets fly to it

every flower gets prettier as it grows
hey I found more petals from the flowers of a daisy and a rose
my errand is almost done
just 2 more meadows, seems like i have only begun

springtime orchard where sometimes i see fireflies
and look i see some blueberries. Where?
Right there
see there on the path each one lies

Finally the last meadow
ow I stubbed my toe
but look i found 3 oak leaves in a row
i actually did gain from some pain

boy im bushed im gonna go home and turn out the light
goodnight


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Post time 2018-11-1 11:53:48 | Show all posts
Great poem!!!!
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thank you very much
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Post time 2018-11-1 20:41:17 | Show all posts
This is such an upbeat poem! I'm loving the vibe. Maybe try some word variation? It can really spice up your work, keep it up!
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xXCloverX replied at 2018-11-1 07:41 PM
This is such an upbeat poem! I'm loving the vibe. Maybe try some word variation? It can really spice ...

thanks for the tip, and glad you like the vibe
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xXCloverX replied at 2018-11-1 07:41 PM
This is such an upbeat poem! I'm loving the vibe. Maybe try some word variation? It can really spice ...

fun fact, i actually was doing this while collecting ingredients at 2;30 am in the morning cause i couldn't fall asleep
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Great poem! I like the light-hearted vibe of the poem, the last few lines gave me a good laugh, they were so funny! XD
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Post time 2018-11-4 13:45:51 | Show all posts
What a fun poem! I like how you rhymed 'Summit' and 'plummet.'
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