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Okay, so I had posted a work in progress thread for this a while ago when I was still working on the chapter. But now I've finished it.
So since I shared the work in progress why not share the complete chapter as well. Just to make things clear, there may be a few spelling errors but if there is I might fix them. Now without further ado, here's the first complete chapter.
Ghosties: Luna & Ghostine chapter 1
The Meeting
"today I've been assigned to a mission!
A very important one at that..
they just called me to find "The chosen one" ooo~"
"Luna!"
Shouted Luna's mom
"It was just a normal day for me again just getting ready for school
It was great- until I got a break.."
Said Luna
"Boo!"
Said Ghost cutting to later in the day.
"ah! umm, hehe who are you and where are you?"
Said Luna
*ghost is no longer invisible*
"Sorry to interrupt but I'm ghostine I'm from the sky dimension seeking help from
someone and you have been chosen Luna."
Said Ghostine
"Okay so why was I "chosen" instead of billions of other people in the world?"
Said Luna
"Well, I'm not the one who made the decision so I have no clue. but the point is
you were chosen for a reason."
Said Ghostine
"I still don't get i-Wait- are you a ghost?"
Said Luna
"Yep- I'm a ghost, big deal."
Said Ghostine
"I must be dreaming because this can't be real." Said Luna
"Nope! all real." Said Ghostine
"alright..." Luna says as she tries to boop the ghost but fails.
"Heh- more importantl-"
Luna tries to walk away but almost trips as Ghostine was speaking
"eep!" said Luna as Ghostine turns invisible and catches her;
"Hehe, sorry.. thank you though; also did you say you needed help with something?
and what can I do to help?" Luna said questionly
"Well there is one thing.." Said Ghostine
*other people start staring thinking Luna's crazy*
*Bell rings*
"Well I don't have time for it at the moment I have to get to class." Said Luna
"Ooh, can I come?" Said Ghostine Excitingly
"Sure, knock yourself out. just be quiet." Said Luna
"Okie, I can do that."
Said Ghostine seriously
Ghostine and Luna walk to class.
"Soo.. what is a class?"
Said Ghostine curiously
"Sh."
Luna shushed Ghostine
*Luna sits on her chair as Ghostine goes behind her and turns invisible*
*one of many lessons lateR*
*Bell rings*
*walking in the hallway*
"Look, I don't trust you and all but what do you want?"
Said Luna questionly
"Look- I told you already. I need- you... to.. help... me..." Said Ghostine
"Okay.. what do you need help with?" questioned Luna
"There's this evil being that's been terrorizing both my dimension and the cloud
dimension!"
Ghostine Answered
"And how am I supposed to believe there's actually an "evil" being attacking two
"dimensions"?
Said Luna
"(sighs) Silly girl, You don't have to believe me. I can show you, but we don't
have enough time for that at the moment."
Said Ghostine
*an unknown person calls out to Luna*
"Luna! Hey Luna!" says a friend of Luna
Ghostine turns invisible as they both hear her. "Oh, Hi Erika! I like your ponytail."
Said Luna "Thanks! I like your braid." Said Erika V. "Okay, even though I had my
hair in a braid yesterday as well." Said Luna
"Hehe, I know." Said Erika V. then Ghostine becomes visible. "..Who is that..?"
Questioned Ghostine "Erika Violet." Whispered Luna
"Huh?" Said Erika V. curiously "Now if you'll just be invisible until Erika leaves
that would be wonderful." Luna whispers again
"Oh come on Luna, you really didn't think that I could be seen or heard by
everyone did you? I mean of course anyone who has a ghostie of their own can see
me." Said Ghostine "Did you hear that?" questioned Erika V. "What..? me? no of
course not.. It's not like there's some type of magical ghost following me or
something... Which there definetly isn't." Said Luna "...Wow. you have a weird
imagination.- ....or not...?" Said Erika V. as she stops and notices Ghostine behind
Luna "Hm?" Said Luna "Hey val, you don't suppose that could be another one of your
kind, do you?" Whispered Erika V. to Valerie
"I'm not sure, but maybe if I just get a closer look at-" Said Valerie quietly
"Careful Val, she could see you- If my theory is correct." Erika V. Whispers to
Valerie "Then I guess you're lucky us ghosties have the ability to turn invisible."
Whispered Valerie
Valerie floats towards Ghostine
"You're right Erika, It's my friend Ghostine!" whispered Valerie loud enough for
Erika to hear her. "Alright, you can float back over here now. I think Luna wants
to speak." Erika V. whispers to Valerie Valerie floats back to Erika "Okay.. that
was weird but I need to go wait for my sister so we can wait for my mom to pick
us up." Said Luna
"If you want, I can wait with you until then. Plus, I have something to talk to
you about later." Said Erika V. "Okay.. Do you wanna play a game for now?" Asked
Luna
"Sure." Answered Erika V. "...Psst, Ghostine?"
Whispered Valerie "..hm..?" answered
Ghostine "What are they playing..?" asked Valerie quietly "I don't exactly know."
answered Ghostine quietly "I think I'll go get a closer look." Whispered Valerie
"Valerie wait...!" Said Ghostine quietly as she tries to go after Valerie as she
floats to the handheld consoles. they made it up there. "That's it! I'm tired of
whispering!" Said Valerie; Ghostine sighs. "Uh, can we talk about that...?" Asked
Luna "I was planning on asking you about the same thing." said Erika V. as she
sighs. "Hello...Am I interupting something?" Said Ashley "Oh, no of course not." Said
Luna "Hey Ash." Said Erika V. "...wait.. are those..?" Questioned Ashley as both
Luna and Erika notice Rosa sticking up from Ashley's hair. "Yep." Said both Luna and
Erika at the same time. "...so.. are we all gonna talk about this later..?" Said
Ashley questionly "Yes." Said both Luna and Erika. "But for now, let's play some
games while I wait for my sister." Said Luna "Luna!" Called Luna's sister "..hey
Char, you can sit over here while we wait." Said Luna "Okay." Said Charlotte as she
sits down. "Hey Charlotte." Said both Ashley & Erika. "Hi." Said Charlotte; Car
parks in the parking lot. "Luna & Charlotte!" Called their mom. "Oh right, gotta go
see ya girls." Said Luna "Bye!" Said Charlotte "See ya later!" Said Erika & Ashley.
Luna & Charlotte climb into the car, "Oh yeah, I forgot to tell you- There's this
thing I have to attend tomorrow. In my dimension, My friend Cloudette is going to
be assigned." Said Ghostine; "Sounds fun, but come to think of it.. that name sort of
sounds like my sisters name." Whispered Luna. "Well, I must admit their names are
quite similar. If you want you can come with me." Said Ghostine "Oh, sure."
Answered Luna quietly. "Speaking of your sister, I sure wonder why she isn't
talking about you whispering." Said Ghostine; "Oh don't worry, she's just listening
to music." Said Luna "Hehe, that explains a lot." Said Ghostine; "That's all the
time I have for now, although this chapter is already over, this is still the
beginning."
I don't exactly know when I'll start and finish chapter 2, but I might be writing a few stories about an alternate universe where Luna is a mage, and Charlotte is a Magician hehe OwO Although I may be drawing more characters and such. 
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