ihaveausername Post time 2018-9-28 22:44:12

Art Talents (New talent series!)

Hey, guys! I'm starting a new 'talents' series using the new talents in 2.0! Let's get this started with art talents (by the way, this was originally written as a commentary on the real-world artists- and how people see them, so if it doesn't seem very 'fairy', that's why that's why). By the way, I will NOT be doing storytelling talent since I concluded my last talent series with it. As always, constructive criticism is always enjoyed! I hope you enjoy!A Viable Career
A swirl of colors issues forthFrom hands, from mind, from brush,from soulSweeping, grand, broad-stroked linesTiny details yet to findEdit, splash, mistake, effort, tryand try againSmudge, rewind, repaint, retryAdd things that were not therebeforeAdd things that cannot be ignoredInspiration gone, time isn’t long,what else can now be doneCan’t hurry genius, can’t hurrygood, or even mediocreCan hurry bad, can hurry poor, canhurry something less-than-mine. What matters now is only time, sokind of bad now becomes fine. The scenes within a mind go gray,the colors on the canvas stayBut they’re not what they should orcould be and are not done properlyTime, yes time, it’s always time. Italways comes back to time. It always comes back to time; needto shift this paradigm. Begone now wretched commission,begone these attempts to relateIssue forth now the true mind; issueforth and unconfineChannel from the very soul, sincethey’re no longer in controlForm an idea, a new goal- to makethis fractured art now whole.

Nighty Post time 2018-9-29 00:30:29

This is wonderful and a great way commemorate all of the talents out there!

MoonFields Post time 2018-9-29 12:49:20

| What a nice tribute to all the Art Talents out there~
| It's true that taking Arts as a career choice is very challenging and if not, one of the most tiring in terms of workflow.
| Sure enough, every project is worth it in the end. Love the poem! C;

Pumpkin Post time 2018-9-29 14:08:43

Wonderful poem!!!! I can't wait to see the other talent poems you're working on. I loved all your past poems. ::clapping::

PearlSnow Post time 2018-9-30 13:16:45

Great poem! I love the two lines where you're telling the actions of an artist: "Edit, splash, mistake, effort, try and try again, smudge, rewind, repaint, retry" I also like how you're doing all of the talents, so definitely looking forward to more! :D

xmistyx Post time 2018-10-6 11:38:21

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