daybreak Post time 2018-9-7 18:13:21

Lilly's Big Scare

          Lilly was captured!! She never thought it would happen to her but here she was being carried away in a glass jar...a smelly one too!!                  What was she going to do? How was she ever going to get away and who was that thing that had caught her so easily?                                                          Lilly had always heard in Fairy Lore about fairies who were captured and never seen again. And now here she was captured. Suddenly her captor stopped and held her up so it could look at her, she closed her eyes too afraid to look at it!! She felt the jar move like it was tapping on the glass. She still refused to open her eyes to afraid of whatever it was.

          Suddenly the lid was being lifted up..this was her chance she had to time it just right...wait she thought wait. Now it was reaching in the jar she only had one chance...Now she yelled and she flew as fast and as hard as she could.





A. Does she get away?
B. Is she grabbed?
C. Does she get lost forever?

daybreak Post time 2018-9-10 15:28:23

You are so right, there are alot of possibilities for Lilly!! Thank ypu for reading my story!!

IAmWillow Post time 2018-9-7 19:13:39

I pick B, because....well just so the plot can progress xD

daybreak Post time 2018-9-9 11:37:41

IAmWillow replied at 2018-9-7 06:13 PM
I pick B, because....well just so the plot can progress xD

Hey sis ...I am working on the rest of the story!! It may be anyone of the abc!!

IAmWillow Post time 2018-9-9 11:51:07

Nice! can't wait to read it sis!

Jeocalix-Inminf Post time 2018-9-9 16:28:13

There are many uncertainty. In spite of she flew very fast, The story don't say if she is in a house or out of a house., because if she was in a house she could be grabbed, but if she was out of a house , she could had got away. If she was transported very away of Neverland, she could is lost forever, and she could start a new life in other lands, and if was in Mainland in Mainlands, if was in other lands in these ones.

Pumpkin Post time 2018-9-15 19:10:36

I am going with A. I hope she gets away.

Nighty Post time 2018-9-17 03:02:57

There's so much potential and material that you can use to work with.
All the options open to another door, they don't completely seal it.
I would say try going down the challenging path and see if you can develop a story with twists and turns.

Jeocalix-Inminf Post time 2018-9-17 15:34:41

Edited by Jeocalix-Inminf at 2018-9-17 02:35 PM

Jeocalix-Inminf replied at 2018-9-9 03:28 PM
There are many uncertainty. In spite of she flew very fast, The story don't say if she is in a house ...
Nighty LOLXD
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