ihaveausername Post time 2018-1-27 11:05:24

Tinker

Edited by ihaveausername at 2018-2-5 21:35

This one's for all the Tinker-talents out there! This one was a little harder, so I'm sorry if it's not as good as the other two talents I've done. As usual, constructive criticism is appreciated. Enjoy!

TinkerTailor, Soldier, Spy(Which I cannot claim)Wrought-iron, Lost itemsBoth used, all the sameOvershadowed by someBut otherwise quite primeExist in shadows, workingUntil the end of time.No nature; innovation(Important, I can’t lie)Pallor casting overBut still daring to tryTo inventions, we To they entrustAnd so we seeTheir talents won’t rust.
EDIT: Hey, I just realized something...I kinda messed up, using the term 'iron' in this poem, since iron is famously hazardous to fairies. I'm going to keep it in there for now, but that might change, and I figured I should probably admit my mistake. Sorry!


XxDawnxX Post time 2018-1-27 14:29:53

wow this is amazing! it really exemplifies how much we need tinker talents, despite them often being overlooked. please write more! ^^

Pumpkin Post time 2018-1-27 19:03:10

Edited by Pumpkin at 2018-1-27 18:04

When I think of Tinker talents I think about the creators of this game. They are always at work tinkering to remake this game. Thanks Tinkers!!!!!!! Nice poem.

amethystdayglow Post time 2018-1-27 19:18:43

Lovely poem! As said above, I think this really brings attention to all the hard work the tinkers do! Can't wait to see which talent is next!

Jasper Post time 2018-1-27 21:54:46

Such beautiful poetry as always!::clapping::

LooneyTunes♥ Post time 2018-1-28 00:35:03

::clapping:: TIS AMAZING *-* and woot woot!!!!! where my tinker buddies @ LOL

zance Post time 2018-2-1 12:45:31

Yaaaas!

You have a really enjoyable style to your poetry.

For the love of words, write on!
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